WRITE FROM THE HEART CONTEST, FIRST PAGE

“It’s too late; I can’t turn around, there’s nothing for me back there.” Kristin grumbled to herself. How life could be turned on its head like that was a complete mystery to her. She hadn’t seen her family for so long and it was all Tony’s fault. But wasn’t she just as bad for allowing him to manipulate her in that way?  The sign to Williamsburg finally came into view, for the first time in a long time her heart soared.

The only real plan she had been going to live with her mother and father, the sooner she could get her own place the better. Not many twenty eight year olds lived with their parents anymore.  A job wouldn’t be a problem she could work on her parent’s farm. One day she would own her own coffee shop cum bookshop, that little dream was a long way off.

The trees had turned golden brown, the sent of apple orchards wafted into the open window of her car. Her stomach growled as she thought of warm apple pie and cream. Kristin was surprised that the houses the town looked as though she had never left. Here time had stood still, the buildings in keeping with how they were in the 19^th century.

Colonial style houses mixed with the modern, the tree lined road onto main street hadn’t changed the nearer she got to orchard Farm the lighter her heart felt. Men would be out of the equation permanently.   Kristen didn’t need any hassle from her parents as to why she had never left before.

They wouldn’t understand that it wasn’t as easy as that; it had all been her fault.  Or that’s how he made her feel and now it was up to her to carve out a new life, a new beginning. It was scary but she would do it she would have too.

My Writing Process

I was tagged by my friend to discuss my writing process.

1: At the moment I am trying to write a medical aimed at the M and B line as well as a first person story. The research I need for the first person story had been done several years before, because I myself needed the information for my own wedding. So its all there I just need to put it together. I have never attempted a first person before but I see it as a challenge. If all it does is sit on my computer for my own satisfaction at least I know that I can do it.

I'm awaiting an answer for two manuscripts that are out there and trying my best to forget about them. Trying hard not to think about the mistakes I have since found in it. Worrying that it would be a no because of them. It is so hard to do but I am trying to keep calm and carry on as they say.


2: I write because I love to do it. I have only been writing seriously for just over a year and have had a novel published through My Weekly pocket novels. My greatest triumph to date, seeing that book on the shop shelves sent a buzz through me that i'm not sure will be repeated at least not for a while. You never know though.  I read anything and everything I can get my hands on, not just in the romance genre that I write. I need books and I need to write. Practise makes perfect, rejections used to get to me and now i see it as well it wasn't right for that company but it could be right for someone else.

3:  I write long hand at first, there is something satisfying of using pen and paper to create your work. I then spend however long to type it up, adding and deleting as necessary.  I can't work in quiet so I sit in the living room surrounded by my boys and write. Often things they say or do will work there way into my books. They take an interest in what i am doing and suggest plot points names, places for me to use.

4: When I ask people to look at what I have done, I much prefer them to be as harsh and as critical as possible. Critique can only make a novel stronger.  From my author peers, I can take anything, even I at times have spat the dummy out of the pram but in the end I have known they are right. It is from this learning curve I am making my stories stronger.

5: Everyone dreams of being accepted by a brick built publisher and i am no different. Will it happen I don't know if I will ever make it, but I will keep on writing and submitting stories.

If you don't put words on a page then you will never get anywhere in this business.

HELPFUL BLOGGER TIPS

When you have created and published a novel either indie or with a publisher, you want to create a buzz for your work. The internet has created a huge outlet for you to get your book out there and seen by millions of readers.

There are several ways of doing a blog tour:

Pay a marketing company to set this up for you.

Your publisher could set this up as part of their marketing strategy.

Or you do it yourself by approaching bloggers.

Getting to know which bloggers will read your novel and give an honest and open review is essential. Not everyone will like the same sort of genre's or want to review your novel. As most people are on facebook and other social media sites, this task becomes easy to do. So many people do blog tours you can click on their links and see how that blogger has reviewed the authors work, what sort of question and answer session they have done. Have they included links to the authors website, twitter, facebook accounts and buy links for their book.

Follow the bloggers for a while.

Comment on their posts even if it isn't about novel's. Get to know what makes the blogger tick, is this someone you feel you can work with?

Does the blogger have a twitter account you can follow, what sort of tweets do they put up. 140 characters isn't much but will still give you a really good idea of their interests.

Promote their blogs on your social media accounts, If you have a favourite post of theirs promote it. Has a post you have read sparked your own thoughts? Write your own  post with link to their blog in it. Promote their work more than yours. "Quid pro quo" something for something.

Email them having a discussion about something on their blog or just a general chat about everyday things. Ask them to review your book and do a blog post on it most people will be happy too.

Obviously if their blog is filled with Horror genre reviews, they probably wont review a romantic work of fiction. If they read many genre's they will. Research is the key to both a good re pour with a blogger and success of your own blog tour.

If the blogger has you on the blog tour converse with people that leave comments. Don't just assume that the q and a session or which ever subject you have discussed is the end of your participation. If you do then your tour could fail if people see you are not as in touch with your readers as you should be.

Facebook is another good place to see the bloggers and personal pictures. It helps you get to know them much better if you know what they like don't like, do you have common interests which could spark a blog debate (nicely)

THE AWAKENING OF POPPY EDWARDS BY MARGUERITE KAYE REVIEW

The Awakening of Poppy Edwards, is the second in Marguerite Kaye's 1920's undone series.

Poppy travelled to the USA after the act with her sister broke up. Now a star on Broadway and in film. She is scared of rejection and of falling in Love the loss of her sister has been a huge burden on her. This is the reason that she has a keep their distance attitude with men. They are alright for a bit of fun but she is unable to handle anything serious.

Meeting Lewis after her act they spend one night together before she decides to up and leave. Never looking back she didn’t do that. When Lewis shows up in his business hat as the famous broadway producer Lewis Cartsdye Poppy is horrified. She has never been a casting couch victim and this is exactly what it appears she has done.

Lewis on the other hand doesn’t believe that is what she was. Yet they are unable to keep their hands off each other no matter how hard they try. Both Lewis and poppy are trying to find a way of not being scared about life. Lewis because he survived the horrors of the war and Poppy for the loss of her sister Daisy.

Lewis organises a reunion for the two sisters and along with her sisters beau Dominic I believe they lived quite happily in L.A.

I didn’t seem to connect as much with Poppy and Lewis, as I had reading Daisy and Dominic. I’m not sure why, the love scenes are hot and the story flowed well. I did find myself shouting at the book when Lewis said the USA won the war in Europe for us, which is a matter of opinion depending on which side of the pond you live. I am liking the era though and would happily read another of Ms Kayes books if she decided to set it in the 1920’s.

4 STARS 

THE UNDOING OF DAISY EDWARDS BY MARGUERITE KAYE REVIEW

The Undoing of Daisy Edwards

Of all the places to meet a woman Dominic Harrington meets Daisy Edwards in a police station. After a night of drinking and injecting cocaine our heroine finds herself in the last place she thought she would be.

Daisy had lost her husband during the Great War, she now finds herself hiding from herself and everyone around her trying to find something to make herself feel alive again. Nothing does, she wants so much but feels guilty that she has lived and her husband is gone.

Dominic too feels guilt over the loss of his brother in the same war, now a Lord and heir to a stately home but refusing to use the house or title as they belonged to his brother. Not him, never him he is sad and lonely. Believing his mother blames him for being alive whilst her first born son is dead. Domanic too feels that his sister is against him and as such they don’t have a great relationship when in truth he has shut his family out.

Daisy only portrays Tragic characters and I loved the references to Shakespeare and Dickens in the novel. I did have to laugh at contraception being called a preservative something I had not heard before. This is a first person story of loss and trying to rebuild lives after the horrors of the war. Both our hero and heroine are fighting against themselves and denying the attraction they feel for each other. The love scenes are hot and sensual as I have come to expect from marguerites books.

The 1920’s is an era I actually no little about and this was the first book I have read set in that era. Through all the heartache of the war to the rebuilding of loves and lives our two characters find it hard to let go of their pasts and fordge a future together. Taking one step at a time, I was taken through many emotions whilst reading this from sadness, to happiness and then wanting to shout at the characters for being so silly and wanting them to give love a chance. They were too young to give up on life.

5 STARS